today was the second interim and we had to show our animatics. so for this animatics, i did not add in any voice over as i did not have anytime to do the recording as i was busy with Animation 2 project. so after the screening of my work, Alan gave some comments on it.
the first was that the introduction of the farm woman was quite abrupt, like quite a sudden you see her in the animation without any introduction. Alan suggest that maybei can introduce her when she starts to collect the egg and then she realise the bowling pin egg then i can add in her different expression.
the second one was to show the other hen laying an egg and then link it to the part where the egg wil start rolling down and hit the 9 bowling pin eggs.
the third one was instead of ending the animation if a fade to black maybe i can end the thing with all the eggs splattering around.
the fourth one was that one of the scene, i did a tracking and it was too fast, the timing went wrong, and it looks like a hen train.
so thats the comment he gave and i should start working and these and good luck to production.
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